too mutch fg imo

haa, nice one !

Very good idea and exposure!....I would rotate it a little to the left looking for the white wall to be vertical.
Carlos

Beatiful, nice compo and concept, abit overexposed on some areas but it´s ok for me.
The name should be "Librarian Nightmare"....!!!

I would like to see this in bw and even selective desaturation (keep the colors on the girl)!

Looks messy!

Did you see byonder anywhere?

Agree on rotation suggestion by the old wise man!

A nice scene and model to work with. Good exposure as others have noted. I agree with oldskool. Foreground is too much and it grabs more of our attention with the bright area. Sometimes tilting objects works, but in this case it detracts from the subject. I would look for different ways to crop this image to put more focus on the girl. I think this would work better in black and white or colorized with different colors.

Nice shot!
I like the composition

Nice concept and composition!

Exposure seems spot on.

I like it!

Really nice composition!!
Good work!!

Fantastic. I adore the setup (and also kind of wish I could experience climbing on a pile of papers and books... seems fun )
Personally, I love the colors. All those shades of white and almost-white are gorgeous.
Did you take any shots without the door in them? I like it, but I feel it's almost too much--too much chaos or destruction or something, and the pile of papers and her punchy black and red clothes are so awesome already. So I would love to see a composition without it, as well. Not to cramp your authorial style, of course; I'm just interested in more from this location.

Really cool composition! I agree with Carlos, a slight rotation would help a little, and Patrick also has a point on the selective desat. but don't trust me that much, because I love selective desat.

good work
i agree about the rotation
+8

I've just started to watch death note..and this shot feels kinda connected to the story. All evil from the bored people
Beautiful shot
9+

Good work!!
+10

Excellent concept ! maybe a little of what the others have said may work in the ppicture!!!

Great concept!

Tommyguns